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Michael/Jan Submissions
by lovely surprise (girlie_girl_23)
at February 14th, 2008 (12:45 am)

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And now, here are the Michael/Jan prompts.

Michael/Jan - book
Michael/Jan - cherry
Michael/Jan - turn that frown upside down
Michael/Jan - leave a note
Michael/Jan - slow motion
Michael/Jan - rain
Michael/Jan - foliage
Michael/Jan - pet
Michael/Jan - blockbuster
Michael/Jan - picnic
Michael/Jan - shoes
Michael/Jan - snow day
Michael/Jan - sanity is overrated
Michael/Jan - ashes
Michael/Jan - so sorry
Michael/Jan - in-laws
Michael/Jan - last ones left on the dance floor
Michael/Jan - little girls
Michael/Jan - Disney movies
Michael/Jan - women are from venus, men are from mars
Michael/Jan - the table
Michael/Jan - the counter
Michael/Jan - the couch
Michael/Jan - Michael's desk
Michael/Jan - emergency room
Michael/Jan - try 'bondage.' I did.
Michael/Jan - drunk
Michael/Jan - moving day
Michael/Jan - Little League
Michael/Jan - ballet class
Michael/Jan - road trip
Michael/Jan - be mine
Michael/Jan - a modest proposal
Michael/Jan - Paris
Michael/Jan - AU - historical
Michael/Jan - AU - gender reversal
Michael/Jan - mile high club
Michael/Jan - conference
Michael/Jan - our friend Pam
Michael/Jan - shower
Michael/Jan - calling in sick
Michael/Jan - sorry
Michael/Jan - loss
Michael/Jan - Scottsdale
Michael/Jan - oops
Michael/Jan - extra awesome
Michael/Jan - candy cane
Michael/Jan - baby
Michael/Jan - wilted
Michael/Jan - Toby
Michael/Jan - photos
Michael/Jan - Carmen Electra
Michael/Jan - gum
Michael/Jan - Pam
Michael/Jan - improv night
Michael/Jan - always by your side
Michael/Jan - the beach
Michael/Jan - knowing you'd defend me
Michael/Jan - something's gotta give
Michael/Jan - under my skin
Michael/Jan - luck be a lady
Michael/Jan - the pizza guy
Michael/Jan - backyard
Michael/Jan - never an absolution
Michael/Jan - sacrifice
Michael/Jan - love is a battlefield
Michael/Jan - she works hard for the money
Michael/Jan - jealousy
Michael/Jan - cravings
Michael/Jan - I can't live without you
Michael/Jan - your side of the bed
Michael/Jan - please stay
Michael/Jan - want ads
Michael/Jan - blood
Michael/Jan - open arms
Michael/Jan - learning to fall
Michael/Jan - dance
Michael/Jan - love till it hurts like crazy
Michael/Jan - reach for me
Michael/Jan - sing
Michael/Jan - my darkest fear
Michael/Jan - I intended these words to come out right
Michael/Jan - perfume
Michael/Jan - the more you love someone, the more he makes you crazy
Michael/Jan - his Catherine Zeta
Michael/Jan - 5.15
Michael/Jan - jog
Michael/Jan - Gould is dead
Michael/Jan - phone call
Michael/Jan - little league
Michael/Jan - vanity plate
Michael/Jan - leave the light on
Michael/Jan - sweatshirt
Michael/Jan - pout
Michael/Jan - cheerleader
Michael/Jan - can't say no
Michael/Jan - dinner
Michael/Jan - Gould
Michael/Jan - am I on speakerphone?
Michael/Jan - stop in the name of love
Michael/Jan - karaoke
Michael/Jan - sleeping beauty
Michael/Jan - George Foreman grills
Michael/Jan - kids
Michael/Jan - runaway train
Michael/Jan - a hearty bowl of Jan
Michael/Jan - Agent Michael Scarn/Catherine Zeta-Jones
Michael/Jan - renting 'Y Tu Mama Tambien'
Michael/Jan - Chinese food
Michael/Jan - Prison Mike
Michael/Jan - AU - high school
Michael/Jan - OK then
Michael/Jan - luck
Michael/Jan - safe
Michael/Jan - all I care about is love
Michael/Jan - physical lovin' ain't bad
Michael/Jan - it's not just a cartoon Jan
Michael/Jan - accident
Michael/Jan - 'til you love me
Michael/Jan - high school reunion
Michael/Jan - make me believe
Michael/Jan - look for me, honey you will find me
Michael/Jan - I'll be here if you ever want me in your arms
Michael/Jan - do you even care if I stay or leave
Michael/Jan - I want to be your lover, I don't want to be your policeman
Michael/Jan - take me as I am, in case I never change
Michael/Jan - ketchup fights
Michael/Jan - picket fence
Michael/Jan - Carol

Drabble away!


Posted by: a. (regalish)
Posted at: February 20th, 2008 01:53 am (UTC)
Frozen, Michael/Jan, Gould is dead, PG-13
jan; is dynamite with a laser beam

When she gets the call, Michael thinks she's joking. Hell, she thinks it's a joke until Richard's mother has to assure her that, no - it's no joke. He's dead. Gould is dead.

His mother puts it in sugar-coated terms - he fell down, looked like he fainted, but never got back up again. At the wake, with Michael clinging to her hand, she learns the truth from Richard's father. It was an acute coronary embolism. He never stood a chance. But the good thing, as Richard's dad tells her, was that he didn't feel any pain.

This is the point Jan starts to feel like a terrible person. Because that comment actually disappoints her. And as she stands there, staring frozen down at his still form in the casket, she feels even worse about the dark mood she's in. She wanted him to feel pain. As she sees him lying there, looking like he's having the most peaceful sleep of his life (ha!), she wishes he would've been in excruciating pain before he died.

This was the man that took her happiness, her energy. The man that took her sense of self and completely shredded her into tiny pieces, the man that committed the rape of her sanity. She wanted him to feel the most intense, blinding pain that a person could feel.

Tears fall, but not for him. For the pain that he deserved but would never experience. For the vengeance she was due but now could never seek.

"Hey. Wanna get out of here?" Michael's soft voice brings her back to the harbor, his hand gently squeezing her shoulder calms her down.

She nods, still staring down into the coffin. "Yeah. Yeah, let's go." Five minutes was more than enough time to waste on him.

On the way out, Michael wraps his arm around her waist, kisses her temple and tells her, "He may not have felt any pain when he died, but you can rest assured he's burning in hell for you."

And she smiles for the first time that day.

Edited at 2008-02-20 01:58 am (UTC)

Posted by: lovely surprise (girlie_girl_23)
Posted at: February 20th, 2008 04:55 am (UTC)
Re: Frozen, Michael/Jan, Gould is dead, PG-13
{Office} Little Moments


Oh vindictive Jan, I love you!

Seriously, this was exactly what I was hoping for. I am just like Jan and wishing that Gould had died an agonizing death, but I am in love with Michael for telling her he's burning in hell for her. AMAZING!

And I also love that through it all, Michael is by her side (without even a thought) and knows just what to do to make her smile again.

Posted by: Xtaline (xtaline)
Posted at: February 20th, 2008 05:34 am (UTC)
Re: Frozen, Michael/Jan, Gould is dead, PG-13

Heh. At least his death can bring her a little happiness :-)

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